The Old Man and the Snowman

The Old Man and the Snowman

the old snowman looks weary
yellow light showing its many flaws
faded hat, straw-less broom
hard aging sting of countless thaws

the old man smiles, places him there,
yellow light showing on his teeth
resists the urge to update history
adjust a crooked, faded wreath

the old snowman chuckles
the old man sings “Frosty”
adjusts his hat and collar
whispers “Merry Christmas” softly

the old man and the snowman
await another Christmas eve
alone amid the snowflakes
in a world that won’t believe


©12/15/2017

submitted to – Christmas Story – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Thank you for entering the contest , John, love your story of the snowman, Congratulations on your win ! Merry Christmas and Hugs Eve ~`*
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December 22, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Thank you for entering the contest , John, love your story of the snowman, Congratulations on your win ! Merry Christmas and Hugs Eve ~`*
Moorman Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:46 AM
John, congratulations. You so vividly captured what so many people do not see at Christmas --- or any other time of the year --- those who will be spending Christmas alone --- except for the snowman and the snowflakes. What a great reminder. Merry Christmas!
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December 16, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Wonderful :) my best to you!
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