The Old Man

An aging old man
Sits on the park bench
As people walk by he says hi

He sits there alone
Feeding birds and such
A Mourning Dove coo’s at his side

The Pigeons all peck
At their food on the ground
As he throws bread all about

He watches the kids
as they play on the swings
And he tries to figure it all out

Where did the time go
One day he was young
And now the years have gone by

He grew old so damn quick
Seemed like over night
And says my how the time it did fly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 11, 2017 at 9:18 PM
A lovely poem Ricky. I must give you a tip, I'm a bird nerd, I have three beloved pet doves and believe it would add to your poem; Morning Dove is a common mistake, it's actually a Mourning Dove, named so for it's mournful song. (of which I can do an awesome rendition :) Bless
Sholar Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I have parakeets myself and the little rascals multiply like crazy man.
Bauer Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 6:01 PM
nice one, ricky! reminds me of the paul simon song "old friends." very poignant...
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February 2, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Thank you.
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