The Old Man

we shall go
 we shall leave
 our sepulchre awaits
 Hmm, sense it
 pop it comes
 what can we!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 21, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Hi Lawrence,, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, it identifies within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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May 21, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Lawrence, interesting, never to old...Linda
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May 21, 2014 at 11:40 AM
fascinating write
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