The Old Man

just as everything is in its place 
the cracked pitcher in the cellar’s window 
the maize porridge pot amid the verandah flowers 
the knife sharpener in the kitchen table’s drawer 
the squared clock hung slanting on the wall 

day after day the old man 
takes off the straw hat from its hook even if it’s cloudy 
pulls it down on his head with both hands 
opens the street gate till it hits the wall 
upright like a thistle he looks down the road 

under the hat colored like an autumn sun 
it gets warmer 
his face furrows overturn a smile 
as if the moist earth sliced by the old times plough 
under the steps of sons grandsons and great-grandsons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 1, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Hi, Cristina, I'm back! I like the beautiful look into your words, how delicate you describe the colored autumn sun. You have so much heart, when it comes to writing. I like how the old man, is everything, plus eternity.... xox~ LINDA
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April 1, 2014 at 11:37 AM
Thank you very much Linda for your kind words. It's been two years since my grandpa passed away...
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