The Old House

Seven generations walked through your door,
Which stood so strong and always welcomed in.
You said goodbye when boys headed to war,
Two soldiers lost to battles they can’t win.

Your kitchen always busy as a bee,
With canning, baking apple crumble cake.
Stone hearth, a place for warmth and drink some tea,
The table decked with riches to partake.

The living room a place to sit and chat,
With pictures hanging for one hundred years.
A chair still there where ancestors once sat,
This room for laughter and at times for tears.

Your nursery where many babies grew,
With bassinet where ev’ry child did lie.
The paint would change at times from pink to blue,
A place where time would always quickly fly.

The floors within have felt each child’s first walk,
Their worn out wood drowned many times with stain.
You watched the aging people gently rock,
You’ve heard and felt the tapping of a cane.

I stand and listen in your sacred halls
And feel that you’re a part of everyone.
Each breath we took embedded in your walls,
Of fathers, mothers, daughters and of sons.

Old house of stone your warmth embraces me,
Your children now all scattered far and wide.
You still stand proud for all the world to see,
The thoughts of you, sweet memories inside.

The house my children grew up in.

Iambic Pentameter  
Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.02.2014
Giorgio’s Contest: Iambic Verse III
2nd
Best of 2014  1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Promise Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:56 PM
The house has witnessed the milestones of children as they grew up, and the successors and predecessors of generations that graced it walls. Nice write. Belated congrats on your win in the contest.
Deschler Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 1:14 AM
I so enjoyed reading this beautiful poem once again. It was a great choice for your best poem of 2014. Congrats on the win, Brenda!... Happy New Year! I wish you all the best for 2015!
Schumacker Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:33 PM
Hi Brenda, Very well done and nostalgic. Nice write about the real world as it was and as it is. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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December 26, 2014 at 10:28 PM
BRENDA, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Great masterful write Brenda! Congrats on huge win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Thanks so much Dr. Sharma
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 5:00 AM
What a living personification of the old house, congrats on the win, Brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta
Poteet Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Your personification of the old house is nostalgic, excellent. Congratulations on your win(s) and on the writing of such appealing piece. Worthy of publication in a journal.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Wow, thank you Reason. I appreciate such a complement.
Haight Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, Brenda! I loved your poem from before, but want to say again how lovely and heartwarming it is. Not too many people can say seven generations of their family walked through the door of the same loved home. Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. You are a great support and inspection.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:06 PM
congratulations on your win Brenda :o)
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Thanks Robert
Yvonne Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:33 PM
WOW I CAN'T BELIEVE IT YOU WON FIRST PLACE! CONGRATULATIONS!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Wow, amazing. Thanks Maurice
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:00 PM
brilliant to re read this - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Thanks Jan XOXO
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Another beautiful painting, Brenda,your words is so beautiful painting this scene. Blessings eve
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 3:51 PM
Thank you Eve.
Deschler Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 2:20 AM
The house that I grew up in will always be a special place for me. I think about it often and wish that I was living there now.... This poem was very heartwarming and it has that beautiful, nostalgic feeling to it. Congrats on a well deserved win, Brenda!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Thank you Kelly
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Congrats on the win, nice poem, Brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta
Richards Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:09 AM
I love this poem! We have lived in the same wonderful old home for over 40 years, and have seen the years come and go....so the sweet sound of your verses hit close to my heart ! Lovely win !!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Thanks Carrie, I'm glad you like it.
Carmack Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 2:10 AM
Brenda - congrats on your win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Rob.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thanks so much Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Brenda, stopping by again to congratulate you on your 2nd place win in the contest. I knew your poem would place high when I read it the first time. A Fav for me! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much Sandra. I put this in the wrong spot LOL.
Kiser Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 3:30 PM
I always enjoy a poem that teleports me to the place, that it is depicting. Well done.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Thanks so much. I'm glad you could see my vision.
De La Luna Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 4:04 AM
Brenda, i love the beautiful piece of yours. I have a penchant for old houses and what you wrote here about it are very true. now, i am missing our old house! glad i read this today :)
De La Luna Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 4:04 AM
this*
Walker  Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 12:08 AM
Beautifully written Brenda and enjoyed... Verlena
Haight Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Hi Brenda, another 7 for me! Wow...what a wonderful job you did with this form, and what wonderful sentiments. I just got an email from Soup, and your poem was #10 on the list of the 100 best new poems! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 7:25 PM
A picture of full lives and a happy home! Light & Love
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:33 PM
I do believe Giorgio is going to love this.Anyway I do.It flooded me with memories of my grandma's old house,you took me there dear lady,and my eyes are misted with sorrow of loss,and joy of memories.Going to my favourites.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine. I am so happy to stir loving memories.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 5:10 PM
I loved it My friend! Old houses I love them, especially the Victorian and colonial ones, old plantations, Georgian architeture, castles and palaces of course. Lot of history in them and ghosts too! Lol. Good luck in this contest Vera! Hugs! Cheers! xxxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thanks so much Dorian.
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