The Old Fish

The Old Fish

That old fish
Chasing a small silver lure
Hanging on my wall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Novotny Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:11 AM
I like thinking that the lure is on your wall. On a serious note, well done, one fisherman to another. ~ Chuck
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 8:37 PM
After you caught the fish, it didn't get any older. Good haiku poem.
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