The Ocean of the Now

I ride the waves of innocence
on the ocean of The Now.
From the depths of dank
a demon stalks my bow.


Posted 11/10/2018
Entered 11/17/2018 in "Life's Tempests" Standard Contest No. 125 Brian Strand
Entered 12/12/2018 in "Tempest Deep" Mid Nov. Theme Contest Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 9:23 AM
It's a pleasure to find this awesome poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Greg~ quick paced rhythm
Gaul Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Thank you Line for noticing. Your comment means a lot. Be well.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 5:53 PM
very cool and unique little poem pulled from your longer one! Congrats on the win
Gaul Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Andrea, your kind notice and visit is always most appreciated... whenever you cross my bow. Namaste, dear poetess.
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Powerful, Greg. Congrats on your podium finish.
Gaul Avatar
June 15, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Line. Sometimes you just write something that really clicks with yourself. Not necessarily the audience. Of course, I know it's not great by any stretch. But this is one of those things for me. Thanks again.
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