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The Ocean Breathes

cymbals crash with frothy force from dark shadows lurk jagged claws volcanic sand gritty and coarse moon beams off a barnacle laced jug from dark shadows lurk jagged claws shinny minnows in steady breaths moon beams off a barnacle laced jug in secluded pools the jelly fish dance shinny minnows in steady breaths volcanic sand gritty and coarse in secluded pools the jelly fish dance cymbals crash with frothy force

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Date: 4/12/2011 9:47:00 AM
Loved the description of the ocean world hereRobb.Very nicely done.Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 9:00:00 AM
Well an awesome Pantoum Robb and luv those jelly fish dancing in pools luv.. u captured the essence of the ocean floor my friend.. superb rhyme as always luv..
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