Robb A. Kopp Poet Pantoum

The Ocean Breathes

cymbals crash with frothy force
from dark shadows lurk jagged claws
volcanic sand gritty and coarse
moon beams off a barnacle laced jug
from dark shadows lurk jagged claws
shinny minnows in steady breaths
moon beams off a barnacle laced jug
in secluded pools the jelly fish dance
shinny minnows in steady breaths
volcanic sand gritty and coarse
in secluded pools the jelly fish dance
cymbals crash with frothy force

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Gautami Phookan April 12, 2011 at 9:47 AM Loved the description of the ocean world hereRobb.Very nicely done.Gautami

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 12, 2011 at 9:00 AM Well an awesome Pantoum Robb and luv those jelly fish dancing in pools luv.. u captured the essence of the ocean floor my friend.. superb rhyme as always luv..