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The Ocean

The ocean is angry better get out of its way It may take you under to claim you like it does to people every day It has no patience it will eat you up and spit you out The ocean is loud no one will even hear you shout You will become one with ocean, sink to the bottom like the treasures that have been there for years. The ocean has no feelings it doesn't care about your tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 4:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michelle. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:38:00 PM
wow,, crushing ending lol,, but true,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:12:00 PM
Fascinating theme & expressions. Look forward to reading more of your work!
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