The Ocean

The ocean is angry better get out of its way
It may take you under to claim you like it does to people every day
It has no patience it will eat you up and spit you out
The ocean is loud no one will even hear you shout
You will become one with ocean, sink to the bottom like the treasures that have been there
for years. The ocean has no feelings it doesn't care about your tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 4:49 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michelle. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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July 6, 2010 at 6:38 PM
wow,, crushing ending lol,, but true,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
Lee Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Fascinating theme & expressions. Look forward to reading more of your work!
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