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The observer’s anxiety

Are we close? Not yet. You will know But it feels so That could be though You rich in past data Are lacking The experience, the values, the journeys Of the observed Without those your plain recorded observations Are waiting to reach the predicted end Or bypass it, showing a new trend.

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Date: 8/10/2024 7:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Shelly Gandhi
Date: 3/4/2025 3:31:00 AM
Sorry for the late reply. I appreciate your comments. Thank you for the greeting. Wish you a good life.

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