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The branch
Of the mighty
Oak tree
That hangs so free
All bent
The grey brownstone
On the corner of 
110 and lex
Survive
And
the old 
Haggard man 
A Survivor
All bent
Points up
To the oak
While the young
Boy looks on 
in 
Reverence and hate
A reminder....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/24/2016 8:08:00 PM
nice poem..... Congrats on being featured....
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 11/25/2016 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Bernard, appreciate it peace to you tocaa
Date: 11/24/2016 4:07:00 PM
Tony, what a great write, I enjoyed your words a lot and congratulations on having it selected as a Featured Poem this week.
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 11/24/2016 7:12:00 PM
Broken wings ..thanks.for the support. I enjoyed the writing..as much as you enjoyed reading my verse.thanks again hugs tonytocaa
Date: 11/21/2016 12:49:00 PM
I like the image, both visual and mental. Congrats. daver
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Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 11/21/2016 7:47:00 PM
Thanks daver,glad you enjoyed ..peace be you..Tocaa

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