Rob Ellis Poet Free verse

The Now of I Love You

by R. Ellis


Blue falls on the river
tonight falling and recoiling
in a splashing wave of stars
like frozen rain.

I miss the most of you that
I know which is a little piece
of something small but powerful
No burning flames no one the
sames just the now of I love you.


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Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2011 at 3:22 PM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Rob. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Daver Austin July 27, 2011 at 10:52 AM I like your simple statement - "something small but powerful" - because that is how it usually is. Says a lot in few words. Congrats on the selection. daver Rob Ellis July 29, 2011 at 6:39 PM hi daver, yes, it's a true story too!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 25, 2011 at 1:31 PM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rob. Love, Carol Rob Ellis July 29, 2011 at 6:38 PM thanks, yes, it was a pleasant surprise for me :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2011 at 8:47 PM Congrats Rob on your featured poem this week on PS... a great one to share with us all with luv.. Rob Ellis July 29, 2011 at 6:37 PM thank you !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 18, 2010 at 6:07 AM Sweetly emotional with vibrant visuals Rob .. enjoyed the Now of I Love You... lovely free verse usage.. thankxxx for your welcome comments on my poetry today.. enjoy your weekend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta December 18, 2010 at 4:41 AM Nice passionate thioughts you have penned so well, rob