The noumena

flow of life rolls on
in time overtaking
deluded dreams
whereupon remains
the void of silence
infinite and vibrant 
luminescent and still
defying delineation
the noumena
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Unseeking Seeker, your poem is a wonderful exploration of life's flow, overtaking deluded dreams, leaving behind a void of silence. The imagery of the infinite, vibrant, and luminescent void defying delineation is captivating. Your words evoke a sense of contemplation and wonder. What a beautifully crafted piece that delves into the mysteries of existence. - Blessings, Daniel
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January 22, 2024 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Daniel dear. I’m delighted you’ve found value in these words
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