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The noumena

flow of life rolls on in time overtaking deluded dreams whereupon remains the void of silence infinite and vibrant luminescent and still defying delineation the noumena

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 5:15:00 AM

life equates to continuous doses of reality??

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/23/2024 8:06:00 AM

No. This is the singularity, wherefrom duality, the manifest universe arises

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/22/2024 6:30:00 PM

Unseeking Seeker, your poem is a wonderful exploration of life's flow, overtaking deluded dreams, leaving behind a void of silence. The imagery of the infinite, vibrant, and luminescent void defying delineation is captivating. Your words evoke a sense of contemplation and wonder. What a beautifully crafted piece that delves into the mysteries of existence. - Blessings, Daniel

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/22/2024 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel dear. I’m delighted you’ve found value in these words