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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

Check out my awesome wing-span. Toss me a few fish while you’re at it! Written 4/2/16 For The Not So Original Monoku Challenge of Timothy Hicks
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Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Not so much a quote, but fun none the less. Have you read any of my quotes?
A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
Leiser Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Love the fun humor in this one, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..Thanks for the visits to my page..
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Back with congratulations, Andrea! Will frozen fish do!?:) // paul
Dutta Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:00 PM
Congrats Andrea to win. You don't miss any contest. Love.
May Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Congrats on the win!
Selfa Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 9:26 AM
That's what I like about you Andrea! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Many congrats Andrea:-)hugs Jan xx
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Mr. Pelican the show off ... the show ain't for free, you know! Very amusing :) Congrats, Andrea, and thanks for participating in my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 2:45 AM
Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win... big congrats Andrea..
Liwayway Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 12:49 PM
awesome monoku...like it and the picture as well :) hugsss
Daniel Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Clever one:} all the best:)
Devnath  Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Beautiful monoku my lovely friend. Waiting to smile to wish you congrats. Nicely expressed. Loved always, bl
Sefunmi Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Lovely write! I managed to write one for this contest too. Just check it out. I am staging my come-back to the soup gradually. This time around, I will be back for good.
Bayles Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:35 PM
I like this poem. MIke
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Love your witty line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:33 AM
This is a fun one!
Heemstra Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Wonderful write as well as the wing-span!
May Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Fishing for compliments works every time!...nicely done Andrea
Callus Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Lovely, challenging and flirty...even if it's the pelican doing the talking:) // paul
Vaso Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:04 AM
You stole my line,I have used that in a few bars, ok it was more like "Check out my awesome........ and buy me a few drinks while your at it!!! " Of course yours is more poetic, and you probably didn't get arrested for saying it!!! :) needless to say loved it!
Woods    Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:57 PM
I'd never seen a pelican until we visited Australia a few years ago. Your poem describes them perfectly.
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