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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

Check out my awesome wing-span. Toss me a few fish while you’re at it! Written 4/2/16 For The Not So Original Monoku Challenge of Timothy Hicks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/19/2016 7:31:00 PM
Not so much a quote, but fun none the less. Have you read any of my quotes?
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:51:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2016 4:01:00 PM
Love the fun humor in this one, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/7/2016 3:26:00 PM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..Thanks for the visits to my page..
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
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Date: 4/7/2016 1:13:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Andrea! Will frozen fish do!?:) // paul
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Date: 4/7/2016 12:00:00 PM
Congrats Andrea to win. You don't miss any contest. Love.
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:49:00 AM
Congrats on the win!
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:26:00 AM
That's what I like about you Andrea! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS
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Date: 4/7/2016 6:27:00 AM
Many congrats Andrea:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:50:00 AM
Mr. Pelican the show off ... the show ain't for free, you know! Very amusing :) Congrats, Andrea, and thanks for participating in my contest!
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Date: 4/7/2016 2:45:00 AM
Such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win... big congrats Andrea..
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Date: 4/5/2016 12:49:00 PM
awesome monoku...like it and the picture as well :) hugsss
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Date: 4/5/2016 7:59:00 AM
Clever one:} all the best:)
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful monoku my lovely friend. Waiting to smile to wish you congrats. Nicely expressed. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:24:00 PM
Lovely write! I managed to write one for this contest too. Just check it out. I am staging my come-back to the soup gradually. This time around, I will be back for good.
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:35:00 PM
I like this poem. MIke
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:02:00 PM
Love your witty line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 9:33:00 AM
This is a fun one!
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Date: 4/3/2016 8:59:00 AM
Wonderful write as well as the wing-span!
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Date: 4/3/2016 6:40:00 AM
Fishing for compliments works every time!...nicely done Andrea
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Date: 4/3/2016 5:09:00 AM
Lovely, challenging and flirty...even if it's the pelican doing the talking:) // paul
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:04:00 AM
You stole my line,I have used that in a few bars, ok it was more like "Check out my awesome........ and buy me a few drinks while your at it!!! " Of course yours is more poetic, and you probably didn't get arrested for saying it!!! :) needless to say loved it!
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Date: 4/2/2016 9:57:00 PM
I'd never seen a pelican until we visited Australia a few years ago. Your poem describes them perfectly.
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