Paul Callus Poet Monoku

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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

unrehearsed _ emergency stop @ pelican (f)lights crossing 


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Contest: The Not So Original Monoku Challenge
Sponsor: Timothy Hicks (inspired by Linda)
Placed 1st

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Teddy Kimathi April 12, 2016 at 5:39 PM Congrats Paul, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Paul Callus April 13, 2016 at 7:15 AM Thank you Teddy:) All the best....paul

Suzanne Delaney April 11, 2016 at 6:49 PM Congratulations Paul: He does look un- rehearsed as he cut quite close to the rail. Quite original thinking. SuZ Paul Callus April 12, 2016 at 2:39 PM Thank you Suzanne! Even this monoku was unrehearsed...wasn't sure how it would fare:) ~ All the best...paul

Poet Destroyer A April 10, 2016 at 10:46 PM Hi Paul, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA Paul Callus April 11, 2016 at 9:00 AM Thank you Linda:) You've been missed...! hugs // paul

Charlie Smith April 10, 2016 at 8:27 AM Cleverly written Paul, congratulations... Paul Callus April 10, 2016 at 12:56 PM Thank you for reading and liking, Charlie:) Regards // paul

Constance La France April 8, 2016 at 2:17 PM Paul, congrats, that sure was original, I always make mine too pretty. .. Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 2:32 PM Thank you Constance. Yours is a very good monoku based on beauty; I liked it when I read it; do not let contests tamper with your pen...follow your heart:) ~ Regards // paul

Rizwana Bhurani April 8, 2016 at 5:36 AM Fight crossing has increased comment crossing......unique write as always....good day Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 10:10 AM Thank you for your generous comments...and the congrats, Rizwana:) ~ Have a nice weekend. // paul Rizwana Bhurani April 8, 2016 at 5:37 AM Congratulations

Probir Gupta April 8, 2016 at 4:27 AM Very imaginative. Congratulations... Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thank you for the lovely comment and congrats, Probir. Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel April 8, 2016 at 2:03 AM Great and unique one:) Congratulations on your win:) Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 10:01 AM Thank you Jo. Glad that you enjoyed it! Regards // paul

Sathya Babu April 7, 2016 at 9:54 PM Great write.......you seem to be a Guru of Monoku's..... Congrats on your TOP win...:-) Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 10:00 AM Pleased that you liked it, Sathya. Thank you. Yes, I like short forms best. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2016 at 7:59 PM GOODie, it scored high. Congrats, Paul. Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 9:58 AM Thank you Andrea. This was a bit of a gamble...could have gone either way, up or down! // paul

Brian Davey April 7, 2016 at 6:53 PM Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest, I love the take on it! Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 9:49 AM Thank you, Brian. Your congrats and comments are appreciated. // paul

Joseph May April 7, 2016 at 6:10 PM Congrats on your win Paul Paul Callus April 8, 2016 at 7:15 AM Thank you, Joseph. All the best. // paul

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2016 at 2:58 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 4:39 PM Thank you, Sara. I loved your high flying winning entry, too:) Regards // paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 7, 2016 at 2:50 PM Congratulations Paul Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 4:38 PM Thank you, Nayda! ~ Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy April 7, 2016 at 2:12 PM Wow! I love this, Congrats on your win, Paul! Janice Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:23 PM I am so pleased that you found it to your liking, Janice! Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong April 7, 2016 at 1:55 PM I knew this was going to do great Paul! Your uniqueness won you first place! Congratulations on your most deserving placement Paul! #7 ; ) Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:26 PM I have faith in your judgment, Connie:) Thank you for believing in my humble efforts! ~ Warm regards // paul

Anisha Dutta April 7, 2016 at 1:40 PM Congrats Paul to win the top place. Best wishes. AnishaD Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:14 PM Kind of you to stop by with congrats, Anisha...thank you! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight April 7, 2016 at 11:48 AM Very clever and outside the box, Paul! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Sandra Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:12 PM I appreciate you congrats and nice comments, Sandra; you did well too to finish on the winning podium! Regards // paul

Bl Devnath April 7, 2016 at 10:49 AM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:10 PM Thank you BL; your sincerity and support are appreciated. Regards to you my friend. // paul

Hansteven Selfa April 7, 2016 at 9:23 AM That's what I like about you Paul! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Jan Allison April 7, 2016 at 6:27 AM Many congrats Paul I knew this would be a winner:-) :-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:08 PM Thank you, Jan!Your faith serves me well:) hugs // paul

Susan Palli April 7, 2016 at 6:08 AM So clever! Congrats on your win! Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:06 PM I am glad you liked it, Susan...thank you! / paul

Stephen Pennell April 7, 2016 at 3:41 AM Lol made me smile congrats on win Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 2:05 PM Thank you for reading and enjoying, Stephen! Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 7, 2016 at 2:36 AM Wow such a lovely monoku.. no wonder top podium Paul.. big congrats .. Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 1:56 PM Thank you Upma; luck was on my side...I have been reading many lovely winning entries. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks April 7, 2016 at 2:31 AM You really thought outside the box with this one, Paul, and in my opinion, was the most creative one on the list. Not only humorous, but it was truly was "out of the blue" when this happened to me! Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest! Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 1:54 PM Many thanks Timothy for my placement in your contest! Always a pleasure to take up your challenges...and txs also for the comments above. ~ Regards // paul

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