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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge


The not so original Monoku challenge.


Floridian wings parade-elegant flaps for Hicks along tranquil coastline





P.S-Brown Gray Pelican is an elegant bird with oversized bill,sinuous neck,big dark body.Pelican glides are so graceful that its falling and rising has an echoing effect just like the waves.They feed by plunge diving from high up.Wing beats are slow,deep,powerful...



Contest:The not so original Monoku challenge.
Sponsor:Timothy Hicks.
2 April 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/13/2016 12:32:00 AM

Wonderful line! Congrats Rizwana, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:51:00 PM

Rizwana, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:08:00 PM

so cute how you personalized it for the judge. Congrats on your fine win.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 4:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Rizwana :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:26:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations Rizwana

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 1:16:00 PM

I see that you combined the pelican and the photographer into one lovely monoku, Rizwana. Also enjoyed the informative footnote. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:26:00 AM

That's what I like about you Rizwana! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for the extra information about the pelican. This was the first one I've ever seen, so it looks like you know more about them than me. You've really personalized this one for me with the "Floridian" and "Hicks" . Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!