Sara Kendrick Poet Monoku

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The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

young pelican lands awkwardly
                         
                                                       breaks a leg while being filmed  

Written: April 01, 2016
Inspired by: Timothy Hicks Contest

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Poet Destroyer A April 10, 2016 at 10:46 PM Sara, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Charlie Smith April 10, 2016 at 8:29 AM Pouch, congratulations Sara on your win...

Joanna Daniel April 8, 2016 at 2:04 AM Congratulations on your awesome win:)

Sathya Babu April 7, 2016 at 8:46 PM Sara: Many Congratulations on your top WIN...

David Mohn April 7, 2016 at 8:05 PM congrats on your wonderful placement Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2016 at 8:00 PM Hey, way to go in the contest, Sara. GREAT win, and congratulations.

Joseph May April 7, 2016 at 6:14 PM Congrats on a fine win Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 7, 2016 at 2:51 PM Congratulations Sara

Connie Marcum Wong April 7, 2016 at 1:56 PM Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Sara! # 7 ; )

Paul Callus April 7, 2016 at 12:31 PM We use "break a leg' before acting or filming....did not happen quite according to script in this case! Congratulations on this podium finish, Sara! ~ Regards // paul

Sandra Haight April 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM Very clever, Sara! Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Anisha Dutta April 7, 2016 at 11:49 AM Congrats Sara for wonderful line to win. anisha D

Bl Devnath April 7, 2016 at 10:46 AM Congrats on your win my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa April 7, 2016 at 9:23 AM That's what I like about you Sara! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 7, 2016 at 2:37 AM Wow such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win. big congrats Sara..

Timothy Hicks April 7, 2016 at 2:34 AM LOL! And here I was thinking "majestic" ... I love your alternative ending to what actually did happen ... poor pelican! This little guy was actually trying to steal some guy's fish bucket (never worked out). Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 2, 2016 at 5:20 AM Wonderful poetry Sara... loved the way u took this challenge..

Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 7:40 PM Sarah, good one, he does seem a little awkward . . .

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2016 at 7:04 PM breaks a leg!! That was a great twist (get it?) heehee. I enjoyed this, Sara.

Jan Allison April 1, 2016 at 6:43 PM Unique take on the theme Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx