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young pelican lands awkwardly breaks a leg while being filmed Written: April 01, 2016 Inspired by: Timothy Hicks Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:46:00 PM

Sara, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/10/2016 8:29:00 AM

Pouch, congratulations Sara on your win...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2016 2:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win:)

Sathya Babu

Date: 4/7/2016 8:46:00 PM

Sara: Many Congratulations on your top WIN...

David Mohn

Date: 4/7/2016 8:05:00 PM

congrats on your wonderful placement Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:00:00 PM

Hey, way to go in the contest, Sara. GREAT win, and congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2016 6:14:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/7/2016 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Sara! # 7 ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 12:31:00 PM

We use "break a leg' before acting or filming....did not happen quite according to script in this case! Congratulations on this podium finish, Sara! ~ Regards // paul

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/7/2016 11:49:00 AM

Congrats Sara for wonderful line to win. anisha D

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/7/2016 11:49:00 AM

Very clever, Sara! Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/7/2016 10:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:23:00 AM

That's what I like about you Sara! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/7/2016 2:37:00 AM

Wow such a lovely monoku.. no wonder great win. big congrats Sara..

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:34:00 AM

LOL! And here I was thinking "majestic" ... I love your alternative ending to what actually did happen ... poor pelican! This little guy was actually trying to steal some guy's fish bucket (never worked out). Congrats and thanks for participating in my contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/2/2016 5:20:00 AM

Wonderful poetry Sara... loved the way u took this challenge..

Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2016 7:40:00 PM

Sarah, good one, he does seem a little awkward . . .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 7:04:00 PM

breaks a leg!! That was a great twist (get it?) heehee. I enjoyed this, Sara.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 6:43:00 PM

Unique take on the theme Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx