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The Norse Night

The thunder rang out….. over…. the foothills, forests and fertile fields like the battle cry of the Valkyrie’s. Rain Fell like the pounding hoofs of their of their steeds. Tree limbs Lay torn asunder by Thor’s lightning, reaching longingly for the fabled halls of Valhalla………………….. mimicking the brawny arms of the Nordic Hordes. The only other sound…. on the feral wind was Loki’s laughter as the flames rose from the churches steeple.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/2/2009 11:04:00 AM
you really throw yourself into different time periods to understand the present - very detailed with imagery.
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Date: 7/1/2009 2:23:00 PM
Very nice! I like it a lot. You choice of words here is amazing! Thanks for the comment. Nate
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Date: 7/1/2009 2:05:00 PM
yes, reads like the intro to an amazing Greek Classic! well done Deb! jim
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:57:00 PM
pheeeeeeew............. classic! debbie!
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:53:00 PM
Wow Deborah a wonderfully colorful piece with strong description throughout! Love Laura :)
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