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For Mark Toney's 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 2 Poetry Contest

   

Premiere Contest WinnerThe Noise

submitted to Seth Pina's Horror Contest in '26 It started with one utterance that grew into a shout. That cry grew louder in his ear. He could not get it out. The bellowing prolonged itself, and then one cry was two. His frightened eyes searched faces on the teeming avenue. On the edge of reason then, he gaped at strangers’ lips, but mouths stayed shut and mocked the truth of his apocalypse. The cries that he was hearing came a hundredfold or more, a deafening cacophony, an oceanic roar. And nightmare revelations that had brought this din in dreams were now his actuality - enwrapping him in screams. The throng pressed on around a man who crouched, with eyes half-dead. And now inside a room he rocks to screams inside his head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Harp Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 6:38 PM
Wow, Andrea, this is amazing ... like insane asylum stuff! You created a very good poem to fit the theme of the contest. Well-done.
Lyricism Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 6:57 PM
Congratulation! For this righteous depiction, write-on.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 9:18 PM
Thanks so much, David
Schiavina Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Such a difficult poem to write and so brilliantly done. Can't congratulate you enough. The work of a genius.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 9:18 PM
Thanks so much
Elias Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 1:31 AM
Pure power raw and real. Incredibly depicted! Congratulations! Well deserved on such a visceral effect!
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 10:51 AM
Thanks. I appreciate that
Reese Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 8:50 AM
Very vivid imagery of what some people go through congrats on a well deserved win
Kauffman Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 12:31 PM
Powerful, Andrea! Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings!
Dronsfield Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem! Ken
Brul Avatar
March 21, 2026 at 12:45 AM
I love the accuracy of each line used here. No over use of words but deep and cinematic. Congratulations on a well-deserved trophy win. Keep shining, ^___^ JCB
Crandall Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:43 PM
Wow, that's a great poem, Andrea! Especially frightening because it could be true of someone having audio hallucinations!
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:59 PM
Thanks so much. This is one of my golden oldies
Pina Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:42 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest, it reminded me of a horror game I played when I was younger. Best wishes, - Seth
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 4:00 PM
Thank you. I am so glad you placed it
Rodgers Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 12:57 PM
Dear Andrea, Congratulations on this little horror poem. You may be on the road to being the next Poe! Blessings, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 3:02 PM
Thanks. I wish. Hahaha
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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September 19, 2020 at 5:34 AM
WOW and double wow... this is a victory that is so deserved, my dear friend. I cringe at the sounds he hears, but so love the words you've penned. God bless you and happy writing.
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September 18, 2020 at 8:23 PM
The pain and anguish of your expression is so genuine as to be felt in goose bumps along my skin. Amazing write, congrats!
Mitra Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Such an amazing write Andrea....Empathy for a condition that is very real....much love and congratulation to you dear....Take care.
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 3:05 PM
This is so powerful. You show great empathy and have helped raise awareness of a very real condition. I'm sure your own conditions that are so unique and hard to describe have increased that empathy. May we all increase in our concern for those who know a different reality from our own. Congrats for the #1 today.
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September 18, 2020 at 12:22 PM
... and "Fear Of The Unknown", --yours is a brilliant exposé that is directed to some and indirectly to others such as myself, ex., the prevailing precautions instituted due to Covid-19, did not stir my neighbors daily view of my home other than the movements of my hired hands outdoors. I am glad to have read your wondrous contribution to a poignant truth of our involving minds, and truly, congratulations for your justifiable 1st Place win, Aloha! William
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 12:20 PM
I have a pill for every phobia out there, and one of them is just THAT, hence, unable to do refills, YIKES! Andrea, thanks for noting the cause of my e'er so oft revisits of my claustrophobic and agoraphobic other self, yet, through exhaustive costly lectures entreating a desperate purpose, albeit, 'tis nay to voices as mines affects my other senses through simplistic fear imagined then realized, whereto, I wrote about it entitled, "Agoraphobia", ...
Radice Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 9:00 AM
I've nursed people in my time who have suffered with mental health issues and I remember one man writing a poem very similar in style to this about the voices he heard inside his head. He used to play the radio loud in an attempt to drown them out. A powerful poem, Andrea, written with empathy about a much misunderstood subject.
Radice Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 10:46 AM
I actually have tinnitus 24 / 7 and have had for several years now. I'm on top of it now. Relaxation (writing poetry) certainly helps me. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 10:01 AM
also a new movie on Netflix: "I 'm thinking of ending it", this shows a woman who hears the ringing in her ears. It truly would make a person feel crazy!
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 9:58 AM
thanks, Gary when I wrote this I never realized one day that I would have a similar thing myself. You know how people have ringing in their ears? My nervous system got so whacked from a medication a doctor gave me, that my mouth "rings" and I imagine sensations in my mouth that are just terrible. Also wind blowing on my back. I am not even mentally ill but some days I feel like I will go crazy from it all!
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Congrats on your well deserved silver medal win, Andrea, with this awesome poem. The twist at the end is particularly impactful.
May Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
Smith Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 12:02 PM
It read as well back then as it does now, congratulations Andrea...
Perlin Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Great job. It made me feel.
Cozart Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 10:52 AM
This is really nicely written, Andrea. A very vivid picture. Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 10:20 AM
You've painted a grippingly disturbing picture, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Janice
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