The Night's Sands

the evening's breeze moved the curtains slowly
this motion to the world was one of compliance
behind them hid the full moon rising
with its scattering light,
like a flock of birds frightened by thunder

on the table, a candle, its smoke moving upward,
after being snuffed out
with wax still soft and warm
an empty glass sits in front of you,
your fingers motionless on its thin stem
all this, cradled in my mind,
as I reach from my chair for your hand
in the still young night  
as we had a date with the ocean sand
where we will leave footprints,
filled in by the dark water of the night,
as each wave merges with the tiny granules
leaving only two sets of prints at the high water mark,
facing each other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Lovely romantic write Frederic ! Congrats on ur win !
Parker Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 12:43 PM
thank you Dr Upma for reading my poetry and for your kind response
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May 1, 2014 at 11:03 AM
FREDERIC... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
Parker Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:21 AM
thank you Linda
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April 30, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Frederic, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
Parker Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 9:27 PM
thank you Skat for reading and your kind response
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April 26, 2014 at 1:14 AM
Hello Frederic, , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA
Parker Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 9:28 PM
thank you Linda for having these kind of contests
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 5:33 PM
You paint a beautiful romantic picture Frederic. Hope the night went as planned.....Tim
Parker Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 5:41 PM
I live close to the ocean Tim and my wife grew up around it...so yes
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