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The Night You Bid Me Goodbye

That time we met in our usual park Holding hands in a night dark Tears adorning your beautiful eyes Do you remember the night you bid me goodbye Sitting on a bench holding each other tight Scared of letting go, and sad about our plight Life had bared its realities to us without a hint of lie Do you remember the night you bid me goodbye Just looking at each other, no words spoken Tears did the talking for our hearts broken More than love was needed for us to get by Do you remember the night you bid me goodbye We were soul mates, we knew that from the start But more is needed to live, than feelings of one's heart When you walked away, I thought I would die Do you remember the night you bid me good bye I still go to our park, I try to be brave And vent my grief at our love's grave Sitting on our bench, all I can do is cry And remember the night you bid me goodbye

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Date: 10/4/2017 12:26:00 AM
Oh this is so beautiful, I love the repetition, and the rhymes, it flows so well... and so emotive. well done.
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Date: 7/13/2017 5:55:00 AM
This is a beautiful heart wrenching poem. Very well written ! :)
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 7/13/2017 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Heidi:)

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