The Night the Stars Went Out

I said it. 
“I’m in love with you.”
And you,
You just stood there.  A wall.

No expression.
No inflection.
No affection.

How can you be so immovable 
After such a declaration?
“Oh I see” is hardly an appropriate sentiment.

Don’t you “see” that I ripped my heart from my chest
And presented it to you, still beating, on my best china?
That I tore off all of my layers, one by one, and gave them to you
Wrapped with a bow?

I’m naked now.

But you don’t see it.
Instead you avert your eyes, turn away.
No, you don’t see!!

This is such a sacrifice for me...
To stand before you as all that I am.
But you,
You back away.  And walk down the street.

The starlight flickers, 
And dies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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