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The Night Sky As How They See It

As they climb to the top of the mound, laying there exasperated, She opens the lid of her vision into the vast darkness above Twinkling there, spread in the millions, Those tiny shining freckles stare at her, wide awake from Nowhere, just to see her glow along with them Slowing in movement, the vision is getting into the crescent crystal of that holy night As her lips curves, she's been seen Seen by him as he witnesses the whole night sky in her eyes.

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Date: 3/11/2022 8:12:00 AM
Great witness. Beautiful poesy in free verse.
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Subasree Gunasekaran
Date: 3/11/2022 9:57:00 PM
Thanks!!

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