The Night Sky As How They See It

As they climb to the top of the mound, laying there exasperated, 
She opens the lid of her vision into the vast darkness above
Twinkling there, spread in the millions, 
Those tiny shining freckles stare at her, 
wide awake from Nowhere, just to see her glow along with them 
Slowing in movement, the vision is getting into the crescent crystal of that holy night
As her lips curves, she's been seen
Seen by him as he witnesses the whole night sky in her eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Great witness. Beautiful poesy in free verse.
Gunasekaran Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 9:57 PM
Thanks!!
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