The Night Awaits the Dawn

Some boys with cheek play hide and seek within a house condemned
their faces gaunt reflecting want that’s hard to comprehend.

With veiled excuse an old recluse is waiting to descend.
His eye despairs above the stairs, he’s never had a friend
to talk about his hidden doubt of how his world will end -
to die unknown, forlorn, alone? No use a farewell penned!

And soon the boys chase phantom joys then, presto when they’ve gone,
the old recluse, with nimble noose and facial features wan,
no longer waits upon the Fates but yawns his final yawn
(like Tinker Bell, he spins a spell, though fairy dust's withdrawn).  

With twisted brow, he’s tranquil now, he’s floating like a swan
and as he fades from life’s charades, the night awaits the dawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 1:59 PM
A beautifully written poem on life's passing. Excellent work Terry.
Deeks Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 4:06 AM
This is truly a write to read and relish... first i saw a black and white photo in my minds eye and for some reason my mind shot to inner city london maybe,just after the war, probably the derelict buildings and gaunt faces, i liked the fact that all in this piece shared that theme (man and children alike) added intensity and a twist .....i really love it all but fading from lifes charades...perfect
Kiya Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:37 PM
darker than your usaul work am i rubbing off on you? heehee :) i like this i am trying to catch up with all your poems ill comment on the ones i ead as i read them
Caulfield Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 6:17 AM
I like the flow of thoughts in this poem. I like poetry that paints pictures. very well done.
Collins Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Wow Terry. This is remarkable. So unaware of the darkness above them. Poor man an ignoble fate. Can't help but want to comfort. love, Kathy
Poet Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:11 AM
A beautiful write Terry.Love it!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Glad I am the first to comment,this is super I love it I find it quite eerie yet light, well done, and a big thanks for the limericks hope I have done them justice.xx
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