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The Night Age

In the age of sixteen

Your heart wouldn’t be clean

This is your dark age

And beauty commits a lot of wage

Sun In your face sinks very deep

And stars in your face grow in a week

No cheese moon can hide them off

If you try to touch them I will pop

Stars in the sky are uncountable

But these stars make a lot of trouble

It is the night age –which is long

And this one is a truthful song!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 9/1/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:49:00 PM
Abdul, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:48:00 PM
ABDUL, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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