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The Newly Blossomed Flower

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Excerpt from my May 21, 2018 poem, "First Rose of May"
for Gregory R. Barden's Arbitrium Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
Also I compressed the last lines of this form
 invented by Gregory Barden: The Qarinage Rhyme

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She is hope anew now that she’s in view! Will she – like me – feel her soul plunge to sorrow? Or will I – like her – be until tomorrow destiny evading. . . a wish faint and fading? Jan. 28, 2020 For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No.40 Poetry Contest

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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/2/2020 7:18:00 PM
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Congratulations, Andrea. A beautiful poem, as always. ...Fran
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John Watt
Date: 3/2/2020 5:13:00 PM
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This stands on its own, even as an excerpt (the title helps). Congrats on your win with the beautiful and thought-provoking quatrain!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/2/2020 4:58:00 PM
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Very special, my friend. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/2/2020 2:42:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2020 2:35:00 PM
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Back for congrats!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/30/2020 1:17:00 AM
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I enjoyed your journey through time and the messages within. Excellent poetry.
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Mike Bayles
Date: 1/29/2020 4:03:00 PM
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I like your rhyme and emotion, Andrea.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/28/2020 4:15:00 PM
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A lovely verse on its own Andrea, there is no better flower than the rose. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 3:48:00 PM
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What a lovely excerpt!
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