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The New Man

He began Much less than The new man With a plan From Christ's clan As he craved Paths unpaved Hearts enslaved Not depraved He was saved What's New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Mini-monoverse January 2, 2022
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Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:47 AM
An encouraging message, Gina! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Great writing in this new style. Congratulations!
May Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Wonderful write Gina, Congrats on your win..
Bowden Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 5:17 PM
In tablets engraved. Sorry, I don’t mean to add to your poem. It was just the first thought that entered my head after reading this piece. Good luck in your contest. Looks like a winner to me.
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 10:54 AM
- Lovely written, Gina - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 9:50 AM
He came here to save us, from ourselves I think, lovely poem dear Gina, Happy New Year, make the most of every day, xo
DiMino Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 9:43 AM
This is beautiful, Regina. Great message and direction. Christ and you are a majority. Love it!
I-Be Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 7:57 AM
An intelligent rhyme. Enjoyed it
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