The Never Ending Battle

Contractual agreements with publisher caused DELETION JS Lambert

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 7:43:00 AM

It sounds like this torture was inflicted by your own father, Joseph. I'm so sorry you and your siblings had to endure this. I was blessed with a loving father, but there are others out there who don't know what it means to show children love and set good examples. Very moving poem! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2011 3:48:00 PM

Good one that expresses what so many families face each day...This needs to be out for the public to know so that help for families will be there when they need it..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/5/2011 3:38:00 PM

Js, this is a very powerful piece, which covers a very taboo subject. I loved it! Thank you for your comments today, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2011 6:45:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme..hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...

A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley

Date: 3/4/2011 9:10:00 PM

wow...I can relate to this in some ways I think...so many kids go through a horrific childhood...then years down the road, when they start to actually deal with, it's a whole other horrific ordeal, trying to overcome. I've experienced this in many ways. This poem is so descriptive, so sad and yet so well written...