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The Neuron You

and all your worth is in vain and your gaze dips wrong again if you do believe you are drowning in the truth in the mind of man every neuron is another world and they're all called insanity manuals are wrong and you when you seek complicity static in front of the mirror see that we are all loneliness bumping into lost and desperate without realizing the darkness itself that in your cells awaits only the numbers are correct fully predictable and sequential indifferent to our insane quest by the chimera of a world of equals

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Date: 6/2/2022 12:55:00 PM
Hmm...I'm thinking we are much more than neurons, Marco. "manuals are wrong and you when you seek compicity" is an exceptionally good line. Are we "all loneliness bumping into lost and desperate?" I suppose chemically we are, seeing ourselves in atomic terms. This is good writing, Marco. A bit complex and thought-provoking, as it should be.
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Marco Chies
Date: 6/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
what a cold day in the south of the world doesn't do... leaves the person thoughtful and cloistered indoors, making reminiscences and generally wrong assessments about life.... lol lol lol

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