The Neighbor Boy

I was sixteen budding and fulfilling.
He was fifteen searching and awkward,
walking me home from a bus stop backwards,
carrying my bags, strutting a silly-grin valor.

What a sweet little braggart, trying to woo me.
Quiet and shy with his little trick, a smile
hesitantly grown, an innocent blossom of trust.
Twisted feet tripped, he stuttered, my heart gripped.

One week later still he walked me, holding my bag
sweetly and silently. I grew bold in his attention
our walks extended and moved for privacy.
Budding and grinning I tripped, fell, and he caught me.

I was seventeen and haughty and proud.
He was sixteen budding and promising...
Life fell apart as the world caved in around me,
exploding inwards I fell, and he caught me.

He has held me all these years never leaving.
A promise of trust and love unending
And still his quiet slow grin unbends
my heart and makes the world re-spin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Tara. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Jennings Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 5:12 PM
how do you find out if it made round one?
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:15 PM
VEry nice, and the way you tied together the metaphor of falling and being caught and the grin that forever unbends. Congratulatons!!
Henderson Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this poem. Charles
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Tara. Love,Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, tara
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congrats Tara on your super win in the Love Story contest with this excellent entry .. enjoy today with lots of luv..
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November 8, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Great love story and win , so enjoyed this write...
Semeniuk Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 6:15 PM
a very sweet poem!
Roberts Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 10:36 PM
what a lovely story, good luck in the contest
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