The Neglected Girl

Siting in darkness is a neglected face
Nobody cares what is her faith
Everybody hates her for what she hasn't done
Everybody jealous of her intelligence

Her step mother ,is so cruel
Locks her in an the cellar
What can she do ,when everybody hates her
No body loves her,nobody loves her

Neglected by everyone is a face never happy
Neglected by everyone are the eyes that cry 
Neglected by everyone is the girl with a face always sad 

Siting in darkness is a neglected face
Nobody cares what is her faith
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 7, 2016 at 12:48 PM
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