The Negative and Positive Absolutes of Life

– |Life| + I recall how I had surveyed you, guardedly from a rocky peak, And why I left the shelter of the mountains, for you. How we wandered on those plains together, Endless long days and shorter nights. You a gazelle and I an eagle. Horned and barbed, we; Leaping from earth; Soaring heights; Left behind; – |Life| + Right ahead; Plunging depths; Chaining us to earth; To leap and soar no more; My gazelle, your eagle, less we; Each day numbered, uncounted nights. Trudging thru mired fields planted with seeds, Someone else chose for us and we unwittingly accepted, Until the mystery of these once sweet green steppes withered. Copyright 2013

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Date: 4/7/2015 8:24:00 PM
Wow Mike! Yours are never disappointing, this is such an outstanding work, simple, well depicted, and deep, followed by a beautiful shape. Well done Mike! :D thank you for your previous visit and comment in my page :D , glad to see ya after a long absence :p, have a great day! Hug, yanny.
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Date: 4/20/2014 5:24:00 PM
Ahh!! Very distinctive work that you have penned ..How we do give up some of ourselves to become one with a mate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:33:00 PM
vivid piece that dissects both sides of life... wonderful penning, michael, and great form too!.. huggs
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Date: 4/20/2014 12:45:00 PM
this is really good writing. Happy easter to you, Dominic. I think your imagery here rocks.
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Date: 4/20/2014 11:21:00 AM
"u a gazelle and I an eagle. Horned and barbed, we; Leaping from earth; Soaring heights; Left behind; Ooooh I love that part, awesome poem, my friend.
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Date: 4/20/2014 9:13:00 AM
I like how you did this. The shape drew me in and the content kept my attention.
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Date: 4/20/2014 9:46:00 AM
That's a very fine compliment for this piece. Thanks&cheers, Richard.
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