The Nature of Being

It is said The human being Is mad For he is bound By his emotions But angels Whisper Sweet nothings To calm His nature To find peace That comes with goodness For as dawn heals the night Man Is healed by the love
Date: 8/31/2018 Human Nature Contest, sponsored by: Edward Ibeh (I could not get the poem to center, and had to use "name" for the form, as the correct form was not a choice)
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Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:30 PM
yours was different . I enjoyed how you interpreted the theme! Congrats for the win.
Groen Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 10:19 PM
thanks for the real comment, Andrea, I know how good you are, I appreciate it! Congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 6:44 PM
a lovely uplifting poem Meru many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Groen Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 10:23 PM
You are always uplifting, Jan, thank you and congrats on your win too!
Toney Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Meru, congratulations on your win and your spiritual perspective on human nature. Love is essential! ~Mark
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Meru. No worries, my friend. I loved this nicely done piece! Congratulations on your win!
Groen Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Thank you, Sir Ibeh, I found your yalta form creative, and believe it should take its' place among the classics.
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Very nice Meru :)
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