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The Nature

See what you can confirm, About the universe beneath the sky, The emptiness of this interstellar nature, The invisible wind that blows your senses, And the globe hanging up on a thin line! See if you can ponder at an instant, When you look up in the air, And touch the empty space, Breath its fresh, breeze oxygen, And analyze what it composed of! See if you can be motionless, Stand still and observe in your own, Be seduced, so you could be fascinated, Show very strong belief in yourself, And you’ll come up with a result! See if you can see a consternation, A lure that instigates you deep inside, Inside a blurred complicated thought, About the reality of your giant world, And the fact that you really exist! See if you could be at the edge, The edge of the starved ocean, And stare at its threatening waves. Do not blow away your mind, But know there is certainly a creator!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/20/2011 8:30:00 PM
Thanks Kristin and Michael for your sincerity... I'm Back
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Date: 8/6/2008 4:36:00 AM
YESYESYES! To everything yes! I agree with every letter here, I have done these things, and know what is there...there are no words to discribe it. So very well done, this is awesome! Love Kristin
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Date: 8/5/2008 7:12:00 PM
This is a very well written and beautiful poem - The ending was marvelous - God Bless
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