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The Nativity Charlieku

Joseph and Mary traveled on a donkey to give birth in Bethlehem, but there was no room in the town's inn In the silence of the starry night, born in a manger the dear Savior Angel announces to the shepherds: "Today nearby is born a baby God's son the Savior, Jesus the Lord Angels sing: "Glory to God in the highest, peace to His people on earth. Shepherds came to the stable to pay homage to the new Infant Jesus. Magi came adored offered Him gifts 10/13/2018 Poetry Contest: Charlieku 4-3-2 Sponsored by: Charles Messina 2-3-4 syllable count https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter “And the angel said unto her, Fear not, Mary: for thou hast found favour with God. “And, behold, thou shalt conceive in thy womb, and bring forth a son, and shalt call his name Jesus. “He shall be great, and shall be called the Son of the Highest” (Luke 1:30–32).

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Date: 11/11/2018 8:52:00 AM
Good work. Congrats on your win. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2018 8:26:00 AM
I think this was my favorite entry for the contest, Eve. Back to say Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2018 11:51:00 PM
back with my Congrats, Eve.
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Date: 10/23/2018 3:11:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2018 10:29:00 AM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your top win. Well penned.
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Date: 10/23/2018 2:43:00 AM
A most fitting theme, now that Christmas is approaching, Eve! Congratulations on your fine win! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/23/2018 2:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Eve :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2018 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this inspirational poem Eve. It is gorgeous!
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Date: 10/22/2018 11:19:00 PM
I love this, Eve. Excellent ku's of this form and a beautiful story well told. Congratulations on your win...hugs Charlie
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Date: 10/18/2018 6:57:00 PM
Excellent my friend...Charlie will love it, Eve...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/16/2018 6:49:00 PM
A beautiful story told with a few words.I wish you luck in the contest, EVE!
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Date: 10/15/2018 6:35:00 PM
Eve, very nice all the best in the contest ~
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:00:00 PM
You chose a great theme, Eve. I need to think one up quick as a bunny. This contest is popular!! well done to you.
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Date: 10/15/2018 1:13:00 AM
- The whole Christmas Gospel in a haiku, Eve :) - Awesome - Best wishes in the contest ......... and lovely Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2018 6:35:00 PM
such majesty in your words, eve, which truly honor this miracle of Jesus' birth... huggs
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Date: 10/14/2018 4:57:00 PM
You've told the story of the Nativity in a very a simple and wonderful manner, Eve! You have a winner here. Thanks for your kind comments re the Old Wheel. I cherish your support and encouragement - Bob
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:11:00 PM
Hi Eve, a most creative way to write your Charlieku. An excellent write that sings the Nativity. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love the content, the words sing their gentle message. Has to be a fave Eve. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:58:00 PM
You did this really well Eve... Nice subject.
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Date: 10/14/2018 11:01:00 AM
A great reminder of the true meaning of Christmas, the sacrifice made by God in giving us His only Son to atone for original sin. Remarkable! Best wishes in the contest, Eve. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/14/2018 2:27:00 AM
You've done a brilliant job of this Eve. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Date: 10/14/2018 1:31:00 AM
Eve, Eve, Eve, Eve, Eve, you are so aptly named with a Biblical name! I cannot stop thinking this. Thank you for the terrific haiku and the Bible verse that adds exactly the right touch. I am in awe, Eve. Have a wonderful day, my friend! You are blessed with a magical pen, touched by God.
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Date: 10/13/2018 9:45:00 PM
Excellent, Eve!! Janice
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Date: 10/13/2018 5:38:00 PM
wow Eve the nativity in haiku form - I'm in awe of your creativity! Hugs jan xx
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