The Nanny, the Shadow

It was an ordinary day,
when time she came our way.
So young and shy, with a lovely smile
I thought she’d stay for just awhile.

But ever since she cared for us
in everything she does.
She was hired so mom and dad could work.
She, no hard task ever shirked.

So I grew up within her care
she gave a love so rare,
from noon till night and every morn 
as though from her I was born.

Now I have grown, I dread this time,
she’s old and past her prime.
She longs these days for her homeland,
I can’t release her loving hand.

I hide my tears but still I cling
to she, the wind beneath my wings.
It is not a normal day,
for my shadow leaves today.





07 July 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Wonderful emotive write n yet another great win Kim! Big Congrats !
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Very emotional, Kim. I enjoyed reading your sad poem. Human bonds run deep. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
A  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Kim, nice win. SKAT
Nance Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:14 AM
So sweet, and loving, thank you for sharing this in my contest..hugs
Bailey Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 6:11 AM
Very touching piece my friend. She sure sound like an amazing lady. Love how you put this poem together and the emotion that goes with it. Big hugs for you Kim. B
Laurie Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 7:20 PM
G'day Kim... you have written a poem here Kim that is so touching that it must be true and the Nanny must be close to your heart - great topic - Lindsay
Harding Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Ohh, this one is so sad! Excellent emotional imagery. xoxo
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:21 PM
so sad Kim yet she will always be in your heart hugs 7
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 10:43 AM
For one I am happy you had a good nanny. I have seen here in the states nannies not paying attention to the one's in their care. Glued to the cell phone. I can only imagine she is like another mother to you...excellent poem...perfect for the contest
Sathasivam Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:43 PM
A great tribute. Very much touching. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:46 PM
a unique entry for the contest, on a nanny. I sure enjoyed this one.
Anish Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:34 PM
You capture a warm, loving relationship well in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Muideen Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 1:26 PM
A sweet and excellent write. your descriptive flow with vivid imagery, you captured your personal moment wisely. Thanks for your pleasantry deed at my page.................A.M.
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 12:14 PM
a lovely tribute I worked as a children's nanny when I left college after my nursery nursing training - gosh it is hard work - have got some great memories:-) hugs Jan xx7
Pinet Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:57 AM
You captured a personal moment in time and shared it with us all. Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 9:26 AM
This is sweet and sad, good luck in the contest.
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