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The Mysterious Island

I hope there's a place Where critics can give an ace Where we can believe the impossible And discover the incredible Travel across the pacific And find the nature's music A mystical and wonderful island An island that can be reach by your hand Few people are allowed to see The mysterious island where nature is free It might be miles and miles away But someday you will see its way You might not find it here Because it's hidden in the walls of your fear Break the stones of brick And let no one see you weak Find your way to that place And you can solve this maze A labyrinth full of struggles And a reward that will make you startle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Nice to see this one again, Zsarrr. LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:24:00 PM
Zsarinna, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thanks!!! <3 =)
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:59:00 PM
Zsarinna :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2014 8:00:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Zsarinna - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 11:59:00 PM
Zsarinna, this is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/22/2014 7:20:00 PM
I like that,,, hidden in the walls of your fear... we can only hope to be able to explore that mysterious island! well said, welcome to poetry soup :)
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Date: 11/8/2014 2:27:00 AM
thanks!!
Date: 8/22/2014 2:38:00 PM
Zsarrinna,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Zsarrr Inna
Date: 11/8/2014 2:26:00 AM
=)

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