Zsarrr Inna Poet Imagism

The Mysterious Island

I hope there's a
place
Where critics can
give an ace
Where we can believe
the impossible
And discover the
incredible

Travel across the
pacific
And find the
nature's music
A mystical and
wonderful island
An island that can
be reach by your
hand

Few people are
allowed to see
The mysterious
island where nature
is free
It might be miles
and miles away
But someday you will
see its way

You might not find
it here
Because it's hidden
in the walls of your
fear
Break the stones of
brick
And let no one see
you weak

Find your way to
that place
And you can solve
this maze
A labyrinth full of
struggles
And a reward that
will make you
startle.

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Poet Destroyer A March 23, 2016 at 11:56 AM Nice to see this one again, Zsarrr. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A April 5, 2015 at 11:24 PM Zsarinna, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Zsarrr Inna November 8, 2014 at 2:12 AM Thanks!!! <3 =)

Skat A August 27, 2014 at 7:59 PM Zsarinna :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2014 at 8:00 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Zsarinna - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos August 23, 2014 at 11:59 PM Zsarinna, this is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Casarah Nance August 22, 2014 at 7:20 PM I like that,,, hidden in the walls of your fear... we can only hope to be able to explore that mysterious island! well said, welcome to poetry soup :) Zsarrr Inna November 8, 2014 at 2:27 AM thanks!!

Poet Destroyer A August 22, 2014 at 2:38 PM Zsarrinna,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Zsarrr Inna November 8, 2014 at 2:26 AM =)