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The Muttering Retreats

To whisper in the eyes of a lover and find the cold frozen tip of a tear in silence, our blue hearts would discover that love had become fragile and austere through our emotion's brawl and our dreadful downfall inlaid in our heart's wall to understand our wonderland turned desert land The shattered love we could not recover Had its time, yet we will always revere The muttering retreats in our minds fall like pouring sand... 5/25/18 contest The Puzzle of My Rhyme sponsor Broken Wings

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! From the first line you had me. Well done!
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Date: 6/24/2018 7:06:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome poem, well done, and oh that beautiful music ~
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem, Frederic.
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Date: 5/25/2018 7:52:00 PM
ohh, the haltered word-steps and reflections on love are poignant and wonderfully designed, frederick... well done!..huggs
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