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The Muttering Retreats

Night will whisper romance, 'neath the blue moon
Love will find eager hearts in which to glow
Stars above will twinkle a mellow tune
     And passion will continually flow
     delicate wings in sight
     so fragile is love's flight
     emotions feel just right
                            moments like this
        sharing a kiss
          enjoying bliss
But heartache can emerge from love's cocoon
Hearts can be shattered by this dreadful blow
Till the muttering retreats on love's plight,
                            all seems amiss
                                  -
 5-24-18
The Puzzle of my rhyme contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Theme: The Muttering Retreats

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Susan Gentry Date: 6/25/2018 6:20:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this romantic poem. Well done! Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 6/25/2018 10:25:00 PM Thank you Susan

Constance La France Date: 6/24/2018 7:08:00 AM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write, well done ~ Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 6/24/2018 9:28:00 AM Thank you for my placement BW

Heidi Sands Date: 6/23/2018 4:46:00 PM Congratulations for your win Joseph :) Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 6/24/2018 9:29:00 AM Thank you Heidi

Line Gauthier Date: 6/23/2018 2:25:00 PM Beautiful, Joseph. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 6/24/2018 9:28:00 AM Thank you Line

Yazmin Malik Date: 5/25/2018 6:44:00 AM Love the passion :) Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 5/25/2018 7:12:00 PM Thank you Yazmin

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/24/2018 6:49:00 PM Romantic and passionate..best for a win, Joseph. Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 5/25/2018 7:11:00 PM Thank you Vijay

Heidi Sands Date: 5/24/2018 5:16:00 PM Very well written for this challenging contest Joseph :) Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 5/24/2018 5:21:00 PM Thank you Heidi..:)