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The Mutinous Fool

soulless patch o’er socket his trusty parrot on shoulder red and green molting hues falling a dead shot hole, smoking perp impaled by the pirate’s hook 5/16/2019 68868LIND Form Not for contest

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Date: 5/21/2019 2:27:00 PM
I wish it was for a contest, and if there was a gold trophy, you would be carrying it home in your backpack full of books.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thanks, dear Poet! :)
Date: 5/19/2019 6:35:00 PM
Sounds like a pirate terror story! Love the description of the parrot!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2019 12:16:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/19/2019 4:51:00 PM
The image you've painted just leap off of the page at me, your reader. I can just picture this 'mutinous fool.' Perfectly penned, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2019 12:16:00 PM
Thanks...your words too leap and make me smile :)
Date: 5/18/2019 7:23:00 PM
Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life .. NOT for me:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 5/18/2019 8:39:00 AM
Again, your words incites an envied picture Kim, Aloha wk
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 5/18/2019 8:08:00 AM
love the imagery here Kim guess hes down in Davy Jones locker lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Jan! Hugs...Kim

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