Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

The Mutinous Fool

soulless patch o’er socket
his trusty parrot on shoulder
red and green molting hues falling
a dead shot hole, smoking
perp impaled by the pirate’s hook

5/16/2019
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Not for contest

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Caren Krutsinger May 21, 2019 at 2:27 PM I wish it was for a contest, and if there was a gold trophy, you would be carrying it home in your backpack full of books. Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2019 at 3:28 PM Thanks, dear Poet! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2019 at 6:35 PM Sounds like a pirate terror story! Love the description of the parrot! Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thank you, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Gershon Wolf May 19, 2019 at 4:51 PM The image you've painted just leap off of the page at me, your reader. I can just picture this 'mutinous fool.' Perfectly penned, Kim! :) gw Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2019 at 12:16 PM Thanks...your words too leap and make me smile :)

Michelle Faulkner May 18, 2019 at 7:23 PM Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate's life .. NOT for me:) Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2019 at 12:17 PM Thanks :)

William Kelii Kekaula May 18, 2019 at 8:39 AM Again, your words incites an envied picture Kim, Aloha wk Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2019 at 12:17 PM Thank you, William!

Jan Allison May 18, 2019 at 8:08 AM love the imagery here Kim guess hes down in Davy Jones locker lol:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues May 18, 2019 at 8:26 AM Thank you, sweet Jan! Hugs...Kim