The Music of Your Kiss

I was floundering on an empty sea.
A granite heart was mine to bear.
When you came along and set me free.
I soaked up all your loving care.
My turtledove,you're everywhere!

You gave me love right from the start.
Needing your touch just fills me up.
Let me carry your smile in my heart.
Keep drinking from your loving cup.
You're cozy as a new born pup!

When day is done and night time falls
hold me close and don't let go.
Our passion rises behind these walls.
The music of your kiss will flow
into my soul,this much I know!


written October 11th,2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 6:46 AM
You know you'd have a fine little sonnet here if you give us 2 more lines, maybe bump the last 2 down & add 2 more to stanza 3? Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Very romantic work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations Debs, a super write xx
Mannan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful Write Deb. Warm congrats for the win.
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:25 PM
congrats on your 5th place win Deb, great job
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:58 AM
So gorgeous and romantic Deb, I am in love ..... in your poem :) Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:52 AM
wow!! so romantic...awesome write friend Deb..(^_^)
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:09 AM
Good poem here. Enjoyed the read
Poet Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 3:34 AM
Very good romantic passionate poem here Deb!Love the line-- cozy as a new born pup.Best wishes to you.
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