The Music of Our Love

When we meet our hearts connect
as though we were cords on a violin 
A shapely instrument of beauty and grace 
When aged the sounds are clearer and more of value 
Equally refined and spiritually aligned

We sing of life and commitment 
And a trust that bonds 
We stretch as the strings and bend to fit each other’s needs 
We are linked in body and soul 
We are music, we are whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Babcock Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 8:38 AM
Beautifully put together like a find instrument. Excellent Laura. God Bless Phyl
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July 10, 2008 at 7:52 AM
THIS IS POETRY!! What a wonderful metaphor of a lifetime of love. I love the 4th line in the first verse. This is one to add to the favorites list. My best, Charlie
Bhopali Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 9:08 PM
I loved your poem. It's too good.
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