The Music Nature Played

the strong shrieking wind
a song for trees to sing to
with a whistling noise

the birds have scattered
the song more dominant 
with the wind howling 

the influx of rain 
inherent, a dripping sound 
a new tune are played 








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Smalling Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 8:49 AM
This is a beautiful poem, Wilma please edit the last stanza, and leave it to dry on my heart
R Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Congrats Wilma on your beautiful triple haiku. Hugs, Emilia:)
Fraser Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Triple congratulations Wilma on your win with this lovely Haiku >> James :)
K. Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:47 AM
Congrats Wilma! Really enjoyed this triple haiku of yours about the music of nature-- wonderful take on the challenge (of course I liked that last haiku best ^_~) hugs to you-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on your nice little trio here, Wilma! Luv, Andrea
Anish Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 7:23 PM
Fine haiku - shouldn't it be " new tune is played"? Small matter - these haku are quite evocative. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Congrats Wilma on your win in the Haiku contest with this tremendous expression in this form.. enjoyed my dear friend and u enjoy your win with luv.. luv..
A   Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Wilma, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
Roberts Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:45 PM
great collection of haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Hey, I got your facebook comment. Where is my answer?? haha.
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Hey Wilma, very nice Haikus you've penned here! Enjoyed the read!...All die beste!...Gert:)
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 3:23 AM
Sigh lovely lovely Haiku ... thank you for the lovely comment on my poem love Jayne
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 10:51 PM
LIke a small symphony of sound in your trio of haiku, Wilma. Sweet music! Luv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:45 PM
An amazing picture you've painted, Wilma! Goes to my favs today! Thank you always for your kind comment and hope you're having a beautiful weekend.. Love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 3:55 PM
I enjoy sitting on the porch and writing trying to pinpoint what instrument sounds that I heard are like..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I was blessed by your words.."Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...My heart was lifted when I read your comments on my work for my write about the cave was deeper than it seemed..Sara
Murphy Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 12:53 PM
so lovely enjoyed thanks for your comments and have a great weekend faleshia
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Wow Wilma u leave the reader quite breathless with these lines.. so lovely... hope u entered it in P.D.'s contest now... we had the influx of rain for days and days ..finally Sunshine today luv..happy weekend my dear friend...
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October 2, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Beautiful scene of what you here at your window... Now we all feel it a little more...wondeful piece Miss W. love Michael
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