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The Muscadine Grapes

the muscadine grapes unpruned in the fall season... grape crop diminished the muscadine grapes unpruned in the fall season... bird nest among vines the muscadine grapes unpruned in the fall season... fireants~wasps~share juice May 17, 2013 Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo Contest: Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/21/2013 1:22:00 AM

yours is the first poem I came too. I've been off line for two weeks. I do love the cute haiku ;}

Jack Horne

Date: 5/19/2013 12:02:00 PM

lol, love this witty write, Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 5/18/2013 11:57:00 AM

Is this the Bacchus of the black motorcycle jacket? The Mogen David folks are getting lazy. I like your grapes mucho. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2013 11:45:00 AM

I'm happy I read your poem... Good luck in the contest... Sara, i was not sure about using both lines in my haiku poem... now that I'd seen your poem and Maria's I think I'm on the right track with my own poem. thank you always~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 5/18/2013 7:27:00 AM

Wonderful Sara ..good luck...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/18/2013 4:36:00 AM

Dearest Sara, drunk was I with the beauty of your verse!

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/18/2013 2:25:00 AM

This is nature music!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2013 12:53:00 AM

beautiful images,Sara!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/17/2013 7:19:00 PM

I love it, Sara. Your poems of nature brings love to one's heart for God's granted beauty. You do it so well!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/17/2013 6:43:00 PM

I really loved reading this awesome write my friend! You have painted a lovely image with this incredible poem! Just to let you know that I believe Alfred wanted the first two lines of each Haiku to be the same, at least that's what I gathered out of this contest! Even though I say this, I wish you could keep you poem just the way it is because I really like it this way! What a tremendous piece Sara, Great Work!!