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The Muscadine Grapes

the muscadine grapes
unpruned in the fall season...
grape crop diminished

the muscadine grapes
unpruned in the fall season...
bird nest among vines

the muscadine grapes
unpruned in the fall season...
fireants~wasps~share juice

May 17, 2013
Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo
Contest: Bacchus The God Who Loved His Grapes

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Debbie Duncan

May 21, 2013 at 1:22 AM

yours is the first poem I came too. I've been off line for two weeks. I do love the cute haiku ;}

Jack Horne

May 19, 2013 at 12:02 PM

lol, love this witty write, Sara

Daver Austin

May 18, 2013 at 11:57 AM

Is this the Bacchus of the black motorcycle jacket? The Mogen David folks are getting lazy. I like your grapes mucho. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

May 18, 2013 at 11:45 AM

I'm happy I read your poem... Good luck in the contest... Sara, i was not sure about using both lines in my haiku poem... now that I'd seen your poem and Maria's I think I'm on the right track with my own poem. thank you always~ Linda

Donna Jones

May 18, 2013 at 7:27 AM

Wonderful Sara ..good luck...

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 18, 2013 at 4:36 AM

Dearest Sara, drunk was I with the beauty of your verse!

Mario De Paz

May 18, 2013 at 2:25 AM

This is nature music!

Andrea Dietrich

May 18, 2013 at 12:53 AM

beautiful images,Sara!

Toquyen Harrell

May 17, 2013 at 7:19 PM

I love it, Sara. Your poems of nature brings love to one's heart for God's granted beauty. You do it so well!

Russell Sivey

May 17, 2013 at 6:43 PM

I really loved reading this awesome write my friend! You have painted a lovely image with this incredible poem! Just to let you know that I believe Alfred wanted the first two lines of each Haiku to be the same, at least that's what I gathered out of this contest! Even though I say this, I wish you could keep you poem just the way it is because I really like it this way! What a tremendous piece Sara, Great Work!!

The Muscadine Grapes

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