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The Murder That Didn'T Work Out

Once upon a fate She took some pills to try to kill the pain excruciate. Then went to bed her soul unfed already dead when someone's deity or other said, “Murder's not a real good way out, mostly 'cause it's not a way out and you could end up finding your way. Entirely up to you is all I'm gonna say.” Then she woke up and went to the emergency room where they detoxed her system while she cogitated on Thou shalt not kill. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nancy Jones Getting Away with Murder/Murderous Thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 5:58:00 PM
On her way out someone pumped her stomach out. You're right, of course, though some died long before suicide.
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Date: 10/9/2011 4:41:00 PM
Well, I for one am happy with the ending of this poem. I had a friend who killed himself and it was very unsatisfying for both of us.
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:30:00 PM
suicide aborted; real fine, nans... we gotta finish our term here... smashin!..:) huggs, sistah..
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