The Murder of the Crows

LOVE IT CHARMA, I AM JUST GETTING BACK FROM A WONDERFUL MOTHERS DAY WEEKEND Thanks for the comments am just answering a bit late I had a very wonderful mothers day. Movie, dinner, shopping,flowers, and I even got my hair in highlights again, how sweet could it have gotten. Have yourself a nice day. Thanks for the write IT WAS WONDERFUL A DEEP WRITE. I WILL CATCH UP ON MY READING LATER ON TODAY. THANKS ONCE AGAIN always,,Irma

feel pity for geese

What a fantastic descriptive consice poem "Haiku" Charmaine ! Goes right to my favs ! Wonderful ! james

Crows are one of my favorite subjects. I suppose some people consider them evil and kill them, but crows are one of our finest preservers of domain. Good luck in the contest, Charma. Love, daver

Charmaine, I was thinking you have included a play on words in your title of this haiku too? (a murder of crows). Excellent writing! Aloha, Connie P.S. The poetic term for a bunch of crows is a "murder." No scientist calls them that, only poets. Scientists would call it a flock.

wow! incredible sensations! Char! and thanks for the comments! jimbo

beautifully written, charma. enjoyed very much

definitely beautifully penned with such a delicate and eerie touch,,I missed this contest for submittal ,,best of luck in the contest,,,and thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..cecil

Thankxxx sweet Charma friend.. happy u enjoyed my contribution to Pisa... its a spectacular site and I just had to write it for the contest... thankxxx for your encouragement and support...hope all is well...luv.. Linda-Marie..

The dreaded circle of life...Nicely done Char...God Bless...Taz

I LIKE it eerie. I felt that way too from it. Thanks so much for your sweet response today, Charma. Luv, Andrea

A delightful haiku, I'm glad you get inspired by the photos...Raul

Eerie is right, Charma--really like the tone you set in this haiku--I wish you'd join the contest though ;) thanks for your comments, on my haiku, cheers to you as well!

Charmaine, very nice Haiku. I think you should enter this in Raul's conest >> James

This contest has inspired some great poems, but this one flies and contend for honor in a safe place. All the best in the contest. I love this. One love

Wish you all the best in th contest. A well penned poem

The best one I have read ..including my own entry... "Flight"... its absolutely the perfect description of the photo.. eerie and dark is the way I viewed it early this morning... I see u agree..luv.. Linda-Marie

Sounds like something from Poe!! Great job!!

Good one- kinda frightful

in transilvania. john

very nice good luck in the contest faleshia

Interesting view of the picture. The last line leaves the reader with a profound thought. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Excellent, Charma! I love the "mourning eerie skies." Great haiku that should do very well in Raul's contest! Love, Carolyn

enjoyed!!

Great Haiku that you have presented here in this one..Good luck in the contest..Sara