Bobby May Poet Free verse

The Mouse Trap In the Sky

I am giving a kids poem a shot I have never done one before

I run through your house
I am Just a little mouse
Looking for cheddar cheese
I cannot not find it anywhere

But I do see a mouse trap over there
Let me go see what kind of cheese
Swiss cheese that stinks to me
I will just eat this electric cord

This maybe a shocker for me
For electricity will hurt you
So never be a fool like me
Stay away from electricity

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Gershon Wolf January 16, 2019 at 12:15 PM Keep up the cuteness! Nice one. ~ Gershon Bobby May January 16, 2019 at 1:13 PM I thought I would try poems for kids, thank you Gershon for your feed back!

Julia Ward January 16, 2019 at 10:53 AM Good one. The mouse was such a fool! Bobby May January 16, 2019 at 11:04 AM I know what a dumb mouse, lol

Line Gauthier January 15, 2019 at 7:38 PM I love the imagery and the wise advice, Bobby. LOL Bobby May January 15, 2019 at 8:14 PM Thank you Line, I tried to be a mouse and and put myself in his place and think with a tiny brain, lol

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2019 at 6:14 PM Good one for your first kid's poem, Bobby! Bobby May January 15, 2019 at 7:03 PM Thank You Andrea!!

Alexis Y. January 15, 2019 at 4:32 PM Hi Bobby, This was a just adorable. It had a good moral as well. I think you should try another. I'll be waiting:-) Alexis Bobby May January 15, 2019 at 5:27 PM Thank you Alexis very much but I am not sure about another one, lol

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 15, 2019 at 2:32 PM Ha! Cute :) Welldone! xomo Bobby May January 15, 2019 at 2:37 PM Thank you Maureen!!