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The Mouse Trap In the Sky

I am giving a kids poem a shot I have never done one before I run through your house I am Just a little mouse Looking for cheddar cheese I cannot not find it anywhere But I do see a mouse trap over there Let me go see what kind of cheese Swiss cheese that stinks to me I will just eat this electric cord This maybe a shocker for me For electricity will hurt you So never be a fool like me Stay away from electricity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/16/2019 12:15:00 PM
Keep up the cuteness! Nice one. ~ Gershon
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Bobby May
Date: 1/16/2019 1:13:00 PM
I thought I would try poems for kids, thank you Gershon for your feed back!
Date: 1/16/2019 10:53:00 AM
Good one. The mouse was such a fool!
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Bobby May
Date: 1/16/2019 11:04:00 AM
I know what a dumb mouse, lol
Date: 1/15/2019 7:38:00 PM
I love the imagery and the wise advice, Bobby. LOL
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Bobby May
Date: 1/15/2019 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Line, I tried to be a mouse and and put myself in his place and think with a tiny brain, lol
Date: 1/15/2019 6:14:00 PM
Good one for your first kid's poem, Bobby!
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Bobby May
Date: 1/15/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thank You Andrea!!
Date: 1/15/2019 4:32:00 PM
Hi Bobby, This was a just adorable. It had a good moral as well. I think you should try another. I'll be waiting:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 1/15/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Alexis very much but I am not sure about another one, lol
Date: 1/15/2019 2:32:00 PM
Ha! Cute :) Welldone! xomo
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Bobby May
Date: 1/15/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Maureen!!

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