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Hickory dickory diddle the cat and the mouse play fiddle they sat on the clock they found on the rock while the spoon danced in the middle. Hickory dickory dock the mouse broke that clock it should have struck one and it won't stick two so he bugged the old lady in the shoe. Hickory dickory dock the cow jumped over the clock he took the spoon who wished for the moon hickory dickory dock. Hickory dickory diddle, the cat played the fiddle he played the great tune that woke up the moon witnessing the dish and the spoon.

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Date: 10/11/2023 6:21:00 PM
Couldn't get it to rhyme.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/11/2023 6:24:00 PM
Ummm there is a bit of rhyming in this.
Date: 10/8/2023 1:37:00 AM
Eve Roper would love this poem. Sounds like a nursery rhyme. Great poem. Blessings
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/8/2023 7:14:00 AM
I mean the nursery rhyme inspired me to write this. A few days ago I posted the short form of this, its just one of these verses.

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