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The Mountains

The wooded path came to an end Next to a sparkling pool The water deep and clear as glass And icy, icy cool I looked to see the waters source When looking up I found The crystal waters, from snowy peaks Made hardly an audible sound Amazed that standing before my eyes Was a monolith in the sky The hugeness of its mammoth rocks A miracle, of time gone by The covered peaks of the mountain height Raked the merciless white washed sky The cool gurgling current was leading the pond Through a peaceful meadow nearby The verdant green of the valley floor Gave sanctuary to the elk and deer And they grazed in luxurious abundance Content, without a fear With the waters murmuring over well worn stones I heard a plaintive song The winds that blow through the crevices above Makes music all day long Then from a craggy precipice A high pitched wailing call Like a mother cougars' maternal sound Announcing her new cub to all What a beautiful world, everything seems good My day has been truly blessed From a morning walk into the wooded hills To an unending wilderness! I slowly walked on a winding path Through a meadow of flowers knee high And the sun beyond a far off hill Was making colors in the sky Eternally grateful I turned and looked back Some clouds now covered its height The rays of the sun produced a buttering glow As daylight surrendered to night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2016 8:37:00 AM
great write George, so much great imagery and rhyme, a great picture of nature indeed!
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful, George. Thanks for taking us along. Congrats. daver
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George D. Miller
Date: 2/4/2017 1:31:00 PM
Daver, your comments are what I try to do in my writings. Thanks for the comment. George.
Date: 2/25/2016 10:14:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:30:00 PM
Very nice George! I can almost feel icy cool water!
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