The Moth and the Butterfly

Before there were humans on earth below, 
There were angels above in the skies. 
There were mountains and trees and woods and streams, 
And moths and butterflies. 

But one day the angels in glory aloft 
Were upset and began to cry. 
It rained, but the butterflies simply scoffed 
At the angels above in the sky. 

The moths were more compassionate, 
And knew something had to be done 
To end the angels' crying fit, 
And so began, one by one 

To rise to the sky above the rain, 
And shed their colors bright. 
The angels observed, and it eased their pain, 
And the colors shone morning til night. 

The crying then stopped and the angels were glad 
As they watched what had happened below, 
For the moths, with a beautiful, selfless act 
Had made the world's first rainbow. 

That is the reason the moths are grey, 
While the butterflies still have their hues. 
The moths gave up most of their color that day,
But the butterflies refused.
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Seeker Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 12:07 AM
Oh wow! Thanks for sharing this, loved it!
Woods Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Hello Daniel! I'm so impressed with your rhyming and meter, this flows so seamlessly. I've never heard this tale! It's a beautiful story of selflessness and compassion. I hope you are still writing and current here on ps...I can't wait to read what else you have! Also, thank you for your service! Xoxo
Bailey Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Crystol! I am loving all of your kind and encouraging comments! :)
Thacker Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 3:36 PM
This is such an amazing poem, Daniel. It has so much to offer the reader. It's wonderful tale, written beautifully, and clever. Well done, sir.
Bailey Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, sir.
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September 28, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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