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This poem was inspired by several Native American folk tales, especially butterfly and moth folk tales of the Hopi, Shoshone, Navajo, and Zuni Native American peoples.

Before there were humans on earth below, There were angels above in the skies. There were mountains and trees and woods and streams, And moths and butterflies. But one day the angels in glory aloft Were upset and began to cry. It rained, but the butterflies simply scoffed At the angels above in the sky. The moths were more compassionate, And knew something had to be done To end the angels' crying fit, And so began, one by one To rise to the sky above the rain, And shed their colors bright. The angels observed, and it eased their pain, And the colors shone morning til night. The crying then stopped and the angels were glad As they watched what had happened below, For the moths, with a beautiful, selfless act Had made the world's first rainbow. That is the reason the moths are grey, While the butterflies still have their hues. The moths gave up most of their color that day, But the butterflies refused.

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Date: 10/10/2024 12:07:00 AM
Oh wow! Thanks for sharing this, loved it!
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Date: 10/8/2024 6:25:00 AM
Hello Daniel! I'm so impressed with your rhyming and meter, this flows so seamlessly. I've never heard this tale! It's a beautiful story of selflessness and compassion. I hope you are still writing and current here on ps...I can't wait to read what else you have! Also, thank you for your service! Xoxo
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Date: 10/8/2024 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Crystol! I am loving all of your kind and encouraging comments! :)
Date: 10/1/2024 3:36:00 PM
This is such an amazing poem, Daniel. It has so much to offer the reader. It's wonderful tale, written beautifully, and clever. Well done, sir.
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Daniel Bailey
Date: 10/1/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, sir.
Date: 9/28/2024 5:10:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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